SGU: LEGACY. pt6 - ENDGAME (plaintext)

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# BRIDGE. A good-sized rocky MOON (tidally locked) filling half the SCREENS. Hardly any FLICKERING. The lone RED enemy ICON still there.

JAMES

We're nearly in position.


SCOTT

Coward's been retreating out of our range the whole time.


GREER

Used to be us afraid of 'em!


Working Console:

CHLOE

At least this moon's metal core shields us from the worst of the EM storms.


N. RUSH (from Console)

Power circuits back to nominal, Colonel. You should be reading better than 70% strength on weapons and shields.


YOUNG (to Console)

Good. Now all we need is deciding if we'll leave unfinished business here or not.


A. PERRY (from Console)

Speaking of which: limiting all FTL work to 'manageable' tasks of no more than a half hour each is slowing us a lot.


YOUNG (to Console)

Sorry, that's imperative: We don't know when we'll be forced to bail out of a bad spot.


CHAIRMAN (from Console)

Ready for some target practice, Colonel?




* DESTINY closely 'orbiting' one of the gas Supergiant's MOONS (barely out of the rings' fuzzy border, very slowly if at all rotating, ROCKY & wrinkly, tiny atmosphere, with white ICE in crevices/valleys). AutoCannons 'rippling'. Shields no longer receiving significant 'speed dust' impacts.

The 'armadillo' ENCLOSURE on the forward-looking shuttle pad RAISES its forward SEGMENTS, revealing the 'nose' of a chunky prototype-looking RAILGUN, with a central 'octagonal barrel' wrapped up in 8 secondary ones, coils, cabling, cooling, EM shielding, braces, hefty electric/hydraulic 'pistons', & all. Not a lot of degrees of 'mobility', but...

As it starts POINTING:

FOCUS along its line of sight: The holdout Command Ship with its meager escort, well beyond beam weapons range.

LOOK BACK: A smallish FLASH appears where the RAILGUN's mouth used to be.

Seconds later, the Command Ship receives a small IMPACT on its surface, with only a small pinprick of a HOLE as result.



# BRIDGE. Cheering, but:

YOUNG

Range's great. Results... not so much.


CHAIRMAN (from Console)

True, it doesn't pack as much energy per shot as a beam. On the other hand...


A soft staccato THRUMMING 'sound' is felt all around.



* SPACE. A nearly continuous STREAM of RAILGUN FIRE launched from Destiny towards the Command Ship, like a 'fire whip': shots GLOW hot at launch, gradually cool down, stop glowing near their target.

The Command Ship receives REPEATED not-so-small IMPACTS on its surface, all around the same spot, doing moderate-to-significant DAMAGE, some PIERCING bodyguard drones. It starts EVADING, but after too many HITS in a very short time, it RUPTURES & EXPLODES.



# GATE ROOM. Jubilation. Tired Novan TECHS (animatedly chattering & gesturing) gating OUT.

Reviewing PAD:

RILEY

(grins)

I knew it! Negligible recoil!

(to mic)

Uncle Wally! Field test was perfect!


MARSHALL

You hadn't fired that weapon before?


RILEY

Not in battle conditions, against a real live enemy.


Several kino-supported floating HOSPITAL BEDS ARRIVE, with the worse injured patients.

MEDICAL TEAM LEADER

We're ready to Gate out.




# INFIRMARY. T.J. with her new med-coat. The only remaining patient, GINN, being readied for transfer. Her hair & face almost normal, with light BANDAGES around her injured cheek. I.V. drips on both arms but not neck. Her left shoulder encased in a rigid translucent PLASTIC that blurs what's going on under it. Same for her right side (around LIVER), right hand & thigh. Light BANDAGES over the rest of her injuries.

As CHAIRMAN arrives:

BROOKS

She's under meds, barely awake.


CHAIRMAN

Thanks, Dr. Brooks. For all.


GINN

(sleepy)

Honey, huhhh, I was dreaming...


Kneeling by her side:

CHAIRMAN

Love, you're the most wonderful, extraordinary, brave...


GINN

(smiles)

I know!

(re: cut cheek)

Ow!


CHAIRMAN

(moved)

You'll get well soon. I cannot live without... without... Never do this to me again!


GINN

I'll be with you, at your side, always, my heart, my life, my dearest Eli. I don't wanna go to that stupid Hospital...


He kisses her good cheek.

CHAIRMAN

It's necessary. We won't be long here. And you gotta care for the twins, too. Promise.


GINN silently MOTIONS for him to lean closer, then (softly) KISSES his lips.

GINN

(sleepy)

I'll do.


As T.J. drives GINN's floating bed out:

BROOKS

Take care, dear.


ELI (from Ancient SCREEN)

Chairman, the 6 missing swarms are back. Hitting the Depots.


CHAIRMAN

(grim)

About time!




# SUPPLY DEPOT 1. NIGHT ('emergency' artificial lighting). Alarms. Both (inactive) RINGS entombed / covered into 'safe' position. Most machinery, weapons, supplies & people GONE. Half the buildings DISMANTLED & partly gone too. HEAVY SOUNDS of enemy fire from Blast Doors, together with some BIG SPARKS.



# SUPPLY DEPOT 3. Alarms. Same situation.



# SUPPLY DEPOT 2. Same situation.



* SPACE. NOVAN JUNGLE/MOUNTAIN PLANET. 7 Command Ships in a loose cluster protected by 200+ drones, overseeing the FLOW of their attack drones towards surface target.

Relatively close to them: IN JUMP 2 Novan BATTLECRUISERS, large hulls like Novus' evac ships, studded with AutoCannons (MKI+MKII, anchored versions), LongBows (MKI, anchored), Railguns (smaller than Destiny's?), AA Batteries (bullets, beams), & all. They immediately start SHOOTING enemies with EVERYTHING.

The escort drones zoom AROUND quickly towards the newcomers.



* SPACE. NOVAN NOT TOO GREEN PLANET. Another 2 Novan BATTLECRUISERS MANOEUVERING, receiving drone FIRE, using (primitive/weak) SHIELDS to avoid the worst damage while SHOOTING DOWN many drones & HITTING the Command Ships with LongBows + Railguns.

6 Command Ships nearby, manoeuvering & EVADING, 1 of them ON FIRE.

Drones come up from the planet's atmosphere to help.



* SPACE. NOVAN AIRLESS MOON. 2 more Novan BATTLECRUISERS, fighting 100+ raging drones (amid plenty of drone DEBRIS), raining RAILGUN + LONGBOW FIRE on 3 different Command Ships, BLOWING 2 of them UP.



# CONTROL INTERFACE ROOM. Holo SCREEN with 'Depot siege' MAP shows the paired newcomers (blue ICONS), several RED enemy ICONS vanished from each location.

Keying:

ELI

Yay!! But what are they?


RUSH

Obviously, the beneficiaries of all the battle-testing we've been doing.


More RED enemy ICONS vanish.

CHAIRMAN (from Console, on the move)

So, Dr. Rush, you found the secret plan already?


RUSH

You needed Destiny to test out your simulations, your theories, and your entire strategy! For all your resources and bravado, you're still afraid to fail!


CHAIRMAN (from Console)

I'm human, after all. Now, what do you think our odds are?


Yet more RED enemy ICONS vanish.

ELI

I'd say we're doing pretty well: they're falling like flies!


RUSH

No plan's perfect. Things can still go wrong. Very wrong.


CHAIRMAN (from Console)

But not yet!


RED enemy ICONS keep vanishing.



# GATE ROOM. GATE INACTIVE. Medical Team & patients still waiting.

MARSHALL (to RILEY)

You bought 'em !?


Reviewing PAD:

RILEY

The entire fleet was being auctioned for recycling after Novus was fully evacuated.


MARSHALL

Even so, it must have been expensive!


GINN's floating bed ARRIVES, with T.J. and CHAIRMAN at her sides.

RILEY

(smiles)

Yup. But now we're leasing them to the Novan military, and getting our money slowly back.

(APPROACHES newcomers)

Ginn-sis!




* SPACE. NOVAN NOT TOO GREEN PLANET. 2 Novan BATTLECRUISERS, slightly damaged, FLOAT in the middle of a debris CLOUD, including all the (destroyed) Command Ships.



* SPACE. NOVAN JUNGLE/MOUNTAIN PLANET. Another 2 Novan BATTLECRUISERS float SCRATCHED yet victorious, while the last Command Ship JUMPS OUT.



# SUPPLY DEPOT 3. No more noises from Blast Doors, nor alarms. Both RINGS uncovered, RISING to position.



# SUPPLY DEPOT 1. DAWN. Blast Doors (heavily smoking, scarred, cratered, partly DESTROYED) slowly/grindingly REOPEN, letting outside light in.

Drone wreckage outside, partial rock slides.



# BRIDGE. Back to 'normal' status.

SCOTT

So the Novans have a warfleet, after all?


GREER

They've been hiding while we were fighting!


CHAIRMAN (from Console)

They were needed to protect Novan space.


YOUNG (to Console)

Wasn't that what we're all doing?


CHLOE

We must consider the broader picture: Perhaps Destiny's not needed anymore.


CHAIRMAN (from Console)

On the contrary: Destiny's the key to beating 'em drones.

(re: nearby MOON)

Hmmmm... can we get a better view of those equatorial plains?


As SCOTT looks up to him:

YOUNG

(waves 'do it')

Humour the man.


Their orbit is ever-so-slightly tweaked.

Shortly:

JAMES

(alarmed, checking Console)

We got company!!!


Alarms blare, Bridge starts RETRACTING into 'combat' position.



# GATE ROOM. GATE ACTIVE. Medical Team & patients gating OUT. Last to go: T.J. and GINN.

CHAIRMAN (to wristPAD)

How many?

(to RILEY)

How long for the new LongBows?


RILEY

(worried)

At least another hour. They gotta make sure...


GATE CLOSES.



* SPACE. 25 Command SHIPS JUMP IN between Destiny and the star.

Drone DEPLOYMENT proceeds at speed.

Initial RAILGUN FIRE, at great range, HITS but fails to seriously DAMAGE a Command Ship.

'Armadillo' enclosure LOWERS its forward SEGMENTS (with a crude
EAT THIZ! graffiti freshly painted across) to fully hide/protect the RAILGUN.

A PORTHOLE/CIRCLE has been (hastily) CUT in them to allow the RAILGUN to safely fire thru.



# CONTROL INTERFACE ROOM. SCREEN with 'battle situation' GRAPH shows the 25 enemy swarms CONVERGING.

Keying/reviewing Console:

RUSH

Again the same Gates. It's like he's making a point.


ELI

Shouldn't we worry about the enemies attacking us instead?


RUSH

Let 'em: We can Jump away, or fight 'em if Young so chooses. They're just a distraction.


ELI

What!?


RUSH

A diversion. A ruse. Smoke and mirrors. All part of the plan.


ELI

How can you say that!? We're risking our lives!


RUSH

Yes. Undoubtedly. And the puppetmaster's here with us, risking his. But he's still a puppetmaster.


ELI

He's challenged you, is that why...?


Re: new DATA:

RUSH

Wait a minute: Something's happening. Something big.


ELI

Where?




# GATE ROOM. GATE ACTIVE. AutoCannons, more 'impactor' CRATES, supplies, stream IN.

Rushing out:

CHAIRMAN

Riley, Marshall, get half the AutoCannons to start jamming, full strength. Don't wait. Do it now.

(to mic)

Colonel Young!




# BRIDGE. Consoles show new situation. Drone STORM approaching, almost in range, many of them inert(ial), while Command Ships try to get closer but are PEPPERED by RAILGUN FIRE.

JAMES

We should be Jumping out already.


Piloting/firing:

GREER

Let's give 'em a good beating first!


Piloting/firing:

SCOTT

With its limited displacement, we need the entire ship to point that Railgun. If they spread out, we'll be in trouble.


Re: Console:

CHLOE

I think they might be doing just that.


CHAIRMAN (on the move, from Console)

Just a few more minutes, it's all we'll need!


YOUNG

I'm getting tired of surprises, Mr. Wallace.


As he arrives, checking his wristPAD:

CHAIRMAN

This is the last one, I swear.


MONITORS show the RED Command Ship ICONS spreading from a loose cluster into a RING around Destiny. Another Screen shows the moon's small PLAINS.



# CONTROL INTERFACE ROOM. Big holo SCREEN shows the infamous 'Blockade' MAP with faint activity SIGNS on many of the Gate ICONS. Smaller SCREEN with 'battle situation' GRAPH shows the 25 enemy Command Ships 'crowning' the MOON Destiny's closely orbiting, their SWARMS close enough to engage Destiny's ICON.

ELI

Gate activity keeps increasing all around, but why? Seems random to me.


RUSH

Well, of course it would...

(his face BRIGHTENS)

Smoke and mirrors! Right under our noses!


ELI

What!?


Keying fast:

RUSH

The sensors! Check the long-range sensors!




# GATE ROOM. GATE ACTIVE. More AutoCannons, 'impactor' CRATES, techs Gating IN. Consoles show more & more Drone RED DOTS regaining activity as the Command Ships TIGHTEN their 'crown' around Destiny. SOUNDS of enemy IMPACTS.

MARSHALL

And here we are, stalemated again. Or worse!


RILEY

Don't worry, uncle Marshall, we have a simm for this one. Now it only needs to work for real!




* SPACE. All Command Ships spread out in a CIRCLE around their target, neatly framed by the MOON Destiny's closely orbiting. The gas Supergiant & its RINGS fill the background.

As Destiny (not too fast) manoeuvers, RAILGUN FIRE 'slashes' the inner sides of their circle, sometimes HITS an EVADING Command Ship, but never damages 'em enough.

Meanwhile, at the opposite side, other Command Ships take the chance to (temporarily) APPROACH & re-assert drone control despite jamming.

About half the drones have regained activity, 1000+ have re-started SHOOTING against Destiny's shields. Half the AutoCannons FIRE BACK.

From that height, 3 small bright SPOTS on the moon's surface can barely be discerned, BRACKETING Destiny.

SUDDENLY a powerful surface-based (white-yellowish) BEAM pierces 1 Command Ship. It RUPTURES. Then another BEAM BLOWS UP a 2nd one. The 1st one is SHOT AGAIN: It MIGHTILY EXPLODES.

Several Command Ships are HIT by surface-based-artillery BEAMS in quick succession (seconds apart) and BLOWN to pieces. Their drones, dormant & BALLISTIC, COLLIDE with others or threaten to hit Destiny (briefly, before being summarily EXECUTED).

FOCUS: 1 Command Ship SPLIT in half & ON FIRE, yet another BROKEN into an expanding cloud of good-sized DEBRIS. And still renewed surface-based-artillery BEAMS surge to hit the rest. 100s of drones SPEED towards the moon's surface.

DESTINY's railgun fire PUMMELS another Command Ship, CRACKING IT.

More surface BEAMS. More HITS. More DEBRIS.

ZOOM OUT: 2 Command Ships (1 on fire) JUMP OUT. Another, apparently DISABLED, receives a lethal dose of RAILGUN SHOTS. The rest in FLAMES or DESTROYED.

ALL drones become inert. Destiny stops FIRING on them, except to BLOW UP any that stray too close.



# BRIDGE. Battle OVER, rising to 'cruise' position. Loud CHEERING. Consoles show the aftermath of the fight.

CHLOE

There must be several thousand intact drones floating out there!


SCOTT

(grinning)

We got 'em where it hurt! They couldn't react!


GREER

Shock and awe!


YOUNG

I'll be damned. Those beams were there all the time!?


JAMES

We'll need more repairs. Luckily it was quick.


RUSH (from Console)

Chairman! Your plan!


CHAIRMAN

(urgent)

Did it work?


ELI (from Console)

And how!!




* SPACE. CARROUSEL: Across 100s of STARS & PLANETS, (relatively close) Command Ships (with deployed swarms or not) are HIT (from different angles) by surface-based-artillery BEAMS (1 or 2 beams each), being PIERCED, DESTROYED, RUPTURED, SLASHED, BLOWN UP, AFLAME...



# CONTROL INTERFACE ROOM. Big holo SCREEN showing the 'Blockade' MAP, with most ENEMY ICONS marked GONE. A label:
Destruction rate: 95%

CHAIRMAN (from Console)

Coming!


RUSH

It was chess, after all.


ELI

Chicken and cheating on a galactic scale!




# GATE ROOM. INACTIVE GATE. Celebrations.

Checking PAD:

RILEY

It's done. My entire career working on this! And now...


MARSHALL

How many of those beams had you buried out there?


RILEY

Nearly 2000! More than a decade just putting 'em all in place!


As 'spent' AutoCannons start STREAMING in:

MARSHALL

(smiles)

Wow! That's planning big!


RILEY

Our accountants said the same. And the mobile units are even worse.


RING ACTIVATES, starts SPINNING.

MARSHALL

Meh. Noctis had that problem, too: even with Earth's advice, our big beams were never cheap enough.


RILEY

I know: We used your concept, uncle Marshall. Now if only Ginn-sis had seen this!


MARSHALL

(taps eyepatch)

She will: I've recorded it all.


RILEY

(grins, touts PAD)

Me too! Come, we'll miss uncle Wally gloating!


As they exit, Ring LOCKS.



# BRIDGE. Empty. Replacement watch arriving. Consoles show the inactive drone CLOUD glinting in sunlight.



# INFIRMARY. Brooks gone. ASSISTANTS tend to a few (lightly) INJURED people. Ancient SCREEN shows Destiny surrounded by vanquished enemies.



* SPACE. CARROUSEL: Across 100s of STARS & PLANETS, Command Ship/drone DEBRIS float/orbit around or fall like METEORS, some EXPLODING on arrival.

FOLLOW (some of) THEM TO:

* ALIEN Mountain PLANET. NOON. Big ROCKS re-join, concealing THICK round BLAST DOORS closing. Bright LIGHT still SHINES underneath.



* ALIEN mostly-ocean PLANET. WIDE BEACH. DUSK. Surface-based artillery BEAM shining up to the sky, is 'cut off' by CLOSING petals of a METAL DOME atop a fat metal cylinder leisurely SINKING to water level, then UNDERWATER. Drone 'meteors' seen high in the sky.

A couple inert drones SPLASH into the sea nearby.



* ALIEN DESERT PLANET. MORNING. Near an inactive Gate, 8 big floating CYLINDERS almost too wide to Gate (each studded with 10s of protruding kino-like SPHERES) surround/brace a central 9th, also 'floating' but anchored by a long metal ARTICULATED STALK provisionally STUCK into the sand. All 9 are emitting relatively thin laser-like BEAMS into the very clear sky, closely aligned in the distance. 10+ Novans with PADs & portable gear (weapons, 'scopes) around.

A faraway EXPLOSION BLOOMS where the beams are pointing. The Novans CHEER. An inert drone ZOOMS high above their heads, CRASHING against distant rocks. 1 by 1 their 9 beams thin OUT. Another drone FALLS to the ground not far from the RING, opening a CRATER in the sand.

Moments later, the 9 cylinders FLOAT independently, start forming a 'train' more or less in line with the RING.

A Novan points her PAD: RING ACTIVATES.



# CONTROL INTERFACE ROOM. Getting crowded.

ELI

(grinning)

He guessed it, like, 30 seconds before it happened. Half the Gate network lighting up at once, subspace and EM activity luring the enemy near the planets...


CHAIRMAN

(smiling)

So he did, huh? Nobody, not even Ginn, knew all the details. Well done, Dr. Rush!


RUSH

(cautious?)

It was a very subtle trap, but suddenly everything made sense: It was always the Blockade, wasn't it? The hidden heart of Pittsburgh Project: Strike at 'em thru their very "raison d'etre", from the ground!


CHLOE

So many years of planning! So much secrecy!


CHAIRMAN

(serious)

The Blockade had to happen: Their show of power, and our best chance. The timeline must not be altered. Even if that meant...

(beat)

sacrifices. Destiny had to fight for survival, to better bait 'em, the entire Armada, and make 'em pay dearly for their over-reaching.


YOUNG

A life-and-death game.


CHAIRMAN nods.

CHLOE

So, we're clear? Or did any of 'em survive?


ELI

(re: SCREENS)

We count 702 swarms confirmed destroyed. Another 46 Command Ships hit, perhaps disabled.


CHAIRMAN

Mop-up teams will Gate to check on those.


RUSH

And the rest gone who knows where. Their 'staging area' is empty too.


SCOTT

But why did we need to fight so many of them, if this was the plan all along?


CHAIRMAN

To test 'em, keep 'em busy, stretch their reserves so we could gauge their size and dispatch, and make damn sure we'd outsmarted 'em and it was gonna work.


GREER

(mimics 'toreador')

Not just for fun, huh?


Arms crossed, from door:

BROOKS

We're lucky there's been so few deaths.


From another door:

RILEY

But we saved millions of lives!


MARSHALL

100s of millions: Today we saved the Galaxy.


ELI

Not yet. Survivors can still attack anywhere.


CHLOE

It might take 'em decades to rebuild their strength.


RUSH

Danger's far from over. Assuming there ain't another 1000 swarms rushing to replace what they just lost.


CHAIRMAN

Let 'em come. Where there's a Gate, we have a stronghold. The drones might be a quick and cheap way to deal with unprepared enemies and startup civilizations, but they've yet to learn how to properly hit a fortress.


CHLOE

But they could.


MARSHALL

They will, if we allow 'em.


YOUNG

But you won't, will you? This is your galaxy now: long after we're gone with Destiny, the Novans will keep fighting 'em drones.


RILEY | CHAIRMAN

You bet!




# OBSERVATION DECK. CHAIRMAN and RUSH watch the inert DRONE cloud, 'intact' drones being VACUUMED OUT by cloaked agents.

CHAIRMAN

No more digging and hiding. We broke their grip, now we need to grow.


Turns to face: SAMANTHA CARTER and JACK O'NEILL.

CARTER

(her reflection is JAMES)

So, just exploring and expanding? Will you seek out the Saurian tribe too?


CHAIRMAN

Someone will, eventually. I guess you got Marshall's report? From Dr. Jackson?


CARTER nods.

O'NEILL

(checks YOUNG's reflection & hair)

You'll go back to playing corporate executive?


CHAIRMAN

I'll prioritize my family from now on. Can't wait to finally use Marshall's Comm Stone to see my mother again. He complained a lot about how war had changed him. In a certain sense, fame and fortune wage war on you too.


O'NEILL

You remember I recruited you, right? Just... wonderin'.


CHAIRMAN

(half-smile?)

You abducted me, from my own home. So long ago, it feels like a whole other lifetime.


O'NEILL

(shrugs?)

Oh. Well... not to me.


CHAIRMAN

The start of an unlikely chain of events that brought us here now. Yet I wonder if I could have done anything differently.

(beat)

I'm ready to step back. Others will continue the fight. Mop-up alone will take years!


CARTER

While Destiny goes on with its mission. Which won't skip any significant part of this galaxy.


O'NEILL

We need to talk about the Railgun, and maybe some... 100 AutoCannons.


RUSH

And supplies, FTL parts, Power Relays...


CHAIRMAN

Destiny will still make 10s of stops before leaving the galaxy. The Novan Federation, its military, and its top industries will provide. All we want is sharing technology with Stargate Command.


CARTER and O'NEILL eye each other.

O'NEILL

I want to know how you can look only half your real age.

(gestures)

And the hair. I'm... y'know: curious.


CHAIRMAN smiles.

CARTER

The Generators will need Naquadah too.


RUSH

We cannot depend on those, unless we can refill 'em. And the same goes for Novan weapons. But 1st, Destiny needs a 'recharge'.




# GATE ROOM. GATE ACTIVE. Last of the spent AutoCannons + some Novans gating OUT. BROOKS & some assistants help injured people go.

SCOTT and CHLOE (hand in hand) watch BRODY and RILEY unpack a mid-size crate labeled:
Ancient-compatible plug'n'play
Sub-assembly phase prototype.
       FRAGILE!
                       Warning:
               Secure motion dampeners
               before turning on!!


A mostly featureless wall-oven-sized BOXY MACHINE (with connectors & slots) emerges from lots of padded wrapping.

CHLOE

That's it? Doesn't look like much.


SCOTT rolls eyes.

Studying the machine up close:

BRODY

This beauty's the missing link that'll take Destiny's Workshop from just a cutting and soldering bench into a fully functional build-and-repair facility, which we've sorely missed since the day we arrived!


RILEY

Sub-assemblies interface with the basic component-crafting Consoles to allow for the building of more complex things, such as power relays, circuit boards...


SCOTT

They're the gizmos in the storage rooms that got blasted to space before people left trees, right? Not as sophisticated as Ancient Merlin's lab, but no mind link, either?


CHLOE

If our reports were correct.


GATE CLOSES.

BRODY

Yeah. We got heat beams for melting and cutting, field manipulators for casting and moulding, lots of programs in the Consoles for automated crafting of small parts... but the rest of the process is kaput, and most technologies are too complex to put together, [+]

(PATS the machine)

This means a whole new level for us!


CHLOE

(gestures)

But the Workshop's automated systems were supposed to handle big things like beam cannons and FTL engines. This is too small for that, isn't it?


As both sides eye him:

RILEY

(points)

You mean the Integration Stage. That's those big crates to the side. Together with the 8 sub-assemblies, we can set up 2 whole Workshops, for redundancy.


SCOTT

With our attrition rates, I'd go for 3 or 4 at least.


BRODY agrees.

CHLOE

That's some impressive engineering, Mr. Riley. Even with the Ancient Database to guide you. You're sure they'll work?


RING ACTIVATES, starts SPINNING.

RILEY

They use similar principles as the repair robots. We've used versions of 'em for years, building the Autocannons, power relays, and lotsa other things. Alas, we didn't have broken Ancient FTL drives on hand but, as Mr. Scott suggests, we'll have plenty of everything to test on board. [+]


BROOKS

This is where the whole 'Molecular Arranger' concept started, and that's been a runaway success.


As BRODY inspects the big crates:

RILEY

There's a complete brochure in...


RING LOCKS.

BRODY

(half-joking)

If I need to read the brochure then you'll have done a poor job, Mr. Riley.


VORTEX WHOOSHES, PUDDLE stabilizes.

IN COME all the 'non-essentials', generally happy after their 'vacations', loaded with Novan 'souvenirs' (neo-kinos, books, PADS, clothing, new haircuts, musical instruments, etc...)

Geologist CREWMEMBER (to another)

The morphology of those mountains is awesome! There's so much more to see in the mines besides Naquadah chemistry in action!


Also GATING IN: more crates (several with clothing: socks, T-shirts, incl. more "Star Industries" ones), 10-12 woodframe 'bundles' showing darkgray tubes, fittings, & big HEMISPHERICAL sockets. Labeled
LongBow MKII.
Assembly required.


SCOTT takes an immediate interest in them.

RILEY

(gestures)

Improved range, can shoot 3 times at max yield without melting down. Recharging stations in these other crates. Dual power, for use with Novan generators or Destiny's grid. Energy balls will Gate in at the next stop with the AutoCannon Rechargers.


As they walk by:

Scientist CREWMEMBER

(gesturing)

...every available surface on the place is a solar energy collector: roofs, walls, windows, vehicles, even the streets under our feet, right? So I got a bunch of this 'solar wrap' on the cheap...

(shows it)

It stores some of what it collects. I'll never need to worry about my laptop's juice again!


CREWMEMBER Friend

Won't do you a lot of good in deep space, tho...


VOLKER and PARK exit the PUDDLE. She with temp 'cybernetic glasses' securely ATTACHED over her nose, cheeks, eyes & lower forehead. He with a 'Star Industries' visor CAP + her DARK GLASSES obscuring his face.

PARK (to GREER)

We had a fun time!


VOLKER

(unthrilled)

I'm famous. Yay.


Manipulating her 'glasses':

PARK

Wow, you really look like him, Mr. Riley! D'you think I should perhaps keep these?


HER POV: slightly DISTORTED/false-colored RILEY & surroundings, with infrareds mixed-in, as she TWEAKS.

RILEY

(keys PAD)

Don't worry, ma'am: We'll get you pan-spectrum glasses to use with your new eyes. Same range, but better throughput, you'll see.


IN comes T.J. carrying a MEDICAL BRIEFCASE.

T.J. (grinning, to CHLOE)

Here's my custom ALS cure! Starts tomorrow!


BROOKS watches them embrace, until distracted by VARRO and WRAY (both unusually relaxed), last to GATE back.

VARRO

(gesturing)

...can tell a lot about people by their gear and tools for fishing, hunting, cooking...


After them comes a mid-size 'food container' labeled:
Fresh Produce.
Keep cold!


GATE CLOSES.

VARRO checks the container. WRAY enjoys the attention her brand-new embroidered SILK KIMONO attracts.

BROOKS

(approaches, smiling)

Stunning elegance! The kimono's cool, too.


WRAY

(grins)

Thanks! It's a gift, from Senator Taylor.

(turning round)

A bit obsessive man, but...


Readying her Medical PAD:

BROOKS

Him, yeah? Pretty popular with the tech crowd and urban places like Noctis. I better scan you now.


As Brooks SWEEPS her:

WRAY

Back to work, huh? After so many relaxing hours reviewing Novan Constitution drafts, the barefoot walks on the lawns around his mansion, and all the Novan delicatessen!


BROOKS

(checks PAD)

It isn't all bad: Kimono's a guaranteed 100% handmade, a unique work of art in this age of molecular designers. Embedded medical monitors are expensive and state-of-the-art too, but...

(keys PAD as WRAY reacts)

someone forgot to turn off their broadcasting.


WRAY

(hesitating?)

Ahem... Thanks, Dr. Brooks.


BROOKS

(smiles)

My pleasure. Now anyone wanting to know all you do or say will need to be real close. Like, say, tonight dinner for 2?


As WRAY considers the proposal:


* DESTINY, all AutoCannons 'reabsorbed' inside, RAILGUN safely ENCLOSED (porthole sealed with metal 'window'), JUMPS TO FTL, leaving behind the magnificent gas Supergiant, its RINGS & moons, + the bounty of 1000s of intact DRONES amid expanding CLOUDS of destroyed ones.



# CORRIDORS & OTHER SPACES. NIGHT SHIFT. Every available corner STACKED up with AutoCannons. GREER and YOUNG walk carefully around. They notice 'inventory stickers' on doors & corridors, intersections, etc:
Starboard, Level 7, Corridor 3,
Bulkhead 5, mains access,
Lift 12 (under repairs) and
This way to GateRoom -->

GREER

She's gotta be, like, 6 weeks away for her treatment!

(gesturing)

They need to regrow her retinas, that kind of thing.


YOUNG

Go for some R&R with her, then. You earned it.


GREER

Perhaps I'll do that, but idleness ain't much my thing. How did it go with Earth?


YOUNG

Same as always: They want more reports, better explanations. As if I understood it all myself!


GREER

We should have kept the armored guys to do the explaining.


YOUNG

Maybe, but I don't mind their going back to their own lives.


They reach an INTERSECTION with a
Sleeping Quarters Section. Level 3. sticker
+ a
You're here: * MAP.

GREER

Night, sir.


YOUNG

Sleep well, Ronald. Tomorrow we're back to Destiny as usual.

(re: MAP)

With some improvements!




# DESTINY. BEDROOM. SCOTT and CHLOE in bed together. FTL 'lights' seen thru window.



# CONTROL INTERFACE ROOM. ELI and RILEY sharing a laugh.

Incoming mic call for:

RILEY

Sweetie! I was thinking of you!! Guess what *exclusive* gift I'll have for you tomorrow!

(beat, sotto)

Besides that, of course!


ELI SMIRKS.



# BRIDGE. RUSH, alone, SIPS coffee, animatedly talking with A. PERRY and N. RUSH.

RUSH

The first Power Relay was... the most. Picture my face when they tell me all they'd ever worked on were simulations!


N. RUSH

(console)

Someone did: it's on the network. Wanna see it?


Merriment?



# ATOM CHEF. BRODY 'testing' a batch of SCOTCH WHISKY he just fabbed.

Yup. Good. Now to improve it...



# MESS HALL. JAMES arrives at brisk step, sees VARRO on the far side, putting the finishing touches to one of his 'on the field' dishes for groups. His new T-shirt proclaims:
Lucians
 just
do it!


There's kitchen utensils + fish bits & pieces all around him (some raw, others cooked/roasted). Nearby, several man-sized Earth-style FISHES hang from a metal frame, waiting their turn. Hardly anyone else around.

JAMES

(approaches, smiling)

That is one damn fine mess you've got going here, mister! Smells all the way to heaven and back, y'know.


VARRO

(cool)

Sorry, Lieutenant: I didn't realize how late it was. These are genengineered, but won't hold fresh for long.


JAMES

(admiringly?)

Got 'em out of the water yourself, huh? Well, then: Let's see if they taste as good as they look, before the scent brings all the other carnivores onboard storming the place.


VARRO GRINS.



# TECHNICAL SPACES. Novan techs review some recently-overhauled CIRCUIT BOARDS.

Schematics galore.



# DESTINY. CORRIDOR. YOUNG approaches his room. The DOOR has an 'inventory sticker':
Sleeping Quarters, Level 4,
Port Side, Corridor 2, Door 8.
       SQ4.PS2.D8


The LOCK refuses to open with a stern CHIME. He tries again. No luck.

Dispatch TECH (female, O.S. from mic, chipper)

Colonel Young!? There's been air pressure loss in that room. Likely battle-related.


YOUNG looks around: no-one in sight. Can't peek thru door either.

Dispatch TECH (O.S. from mic)

Don't try to open the door! Damage Control crews will look into it in a few hours, when they're done with the priority stuff.


YOUNG's about to SMASH the lock with his fist, instead BANGS the door.

Dispatch TECH (O.S. from mic)

But don't worry, you've been temporarily reassigned.


YOUNG (to mic, closes eyes)

Too tired to argue. Where to?


Dispatch TECH (O.S. from mic)

SQ4.PS3.D5. You don't have...? Right, I can guide you from here. It's just the next corridor.




# DESTINY. ADJACENT CORRIDOR. Approaching destination room, labeled
SQ4.PS3.D5

YOUNG (to mic)

Tomorrow remind me to show you people how to simplify this system.


Dispatch TECH (O.S. from mic)

As you wish, sir! Good night!


Just before he touches the LOCK, the door OPENS from the inside. It's T.J. in a satin NIGHTSHIRT and a smile.

T.J.

(beckons)

Last chance to be with the old 'me', Everett.


As she retreats, YOUNG (cool) walks in, CLOSES the door.



# GATE ROOM. GATE inactive. (new) Novan techs coming & going to a big PILE of new crates & supplies.



# INFIRMARY. Assistants tend to a few lightly bandaged patients.



# DESTINY. BEDROOM. PARK with her 'cybernetic glasses' reading a fat Novan book (on medicinal plants) in bed. As GREER opens the door, she smiles, closes the book:
Biochemical Factories All Around Us:
Identification, Properties and Uses.




# OBSERVATION DECK. WRAY and BROOKS (in discreetly elegant Novan ATTIRE, minus labcoat) enjoying (luxurious) after-dinner talk & vistas, a glass of clear WINE each. They're pretty much alone.

WRAY

(impressed?)

Two ex-husbands and an ex-wife!? Wow! It's a brave new world!


BROOKS

(smiles, gesturing?)

To say nothing of children, grand-children, great-grand-children and extended family scattered across more than 20 different planets.


WRAY

Oh my.

(sips WINE)

The price of a successful life, I guess? Meet interesting people, do interesting things...


BROOKS

(nods)

Move on when needed... I'll drink to that.

(sips WINE)

But you're still young, dear: best part of your life lies ahead!


WRAY

(smiles, toasts)

I'll drink to that!




* DESTINY IN FTL, approaches then flies PAST camera. Old hull SCARS (partly stitched) + new DAMAGE plainly visible.


DREAM/FLASHBACK:

* NOVAN CITY. Novus-like. MORNING. VOLKER and PARK have just exited the OPHTHALMOLOGIST into a fashionable STREET, full of people/shoppers + abundant attendant/hovering (smallish) neo-kinos. HOVERCARS of all makes rush past. She trials her temp 'cybernetic glasses' on a bio-engineering BROCHURE:
...the better part of your nature...

then on a STOREFRONT showcasing several 'medical' EXOSKELETONS. He peruses some 'vintage' merchandise / memorabilia nearby: a flowery Hawaiian-style shirt, a black T-shirt captioned
I went to Novus and all I got
was this stuffed T-shirt!
over the image of a planet entirely enshrouded by gray clouds,

a white T-shirt captioned
Black holes SUCK! over the image of a fat black dot,

a stuffed TOY Destiny, a carefully preserved old MAGAZINE featuring an early-30s ELI (cool, in 'casual business' attire) with a smallish neo-kino hovering over his open hand, captioned
Man of the Decade:

To the back of it all, a somewhat aged mid-sized SIGN advertises:
Novus Prime Realtors.
The Best Locations!
       Bargain Prices!
Chance of a lifetime!


PARK

Nice place to settle down, don't you think?


As they stroll along the sidewalk, a FLAMBOYANT TV HOST intercepts 'em.

TV HOST (fast, to kino-camera)

Dear viewers of the 'Destiny Watch Live Show', today with us: None other than our beloved Ancestor Dr. Lisa Park in the flesh!! Everybody, say 'hi' to Lisa!!!


Behind and framing them, a mini-kino-supported floating SCREEN shows a frenzied audience clapping, shouting, bouncing...

TV HOST (fast, to kino-camera)

And how're you liking our world, Lisa?

(before PARK has a chance to react)

Hold that thought! Sharp-eyed members of 'Destiny Watch' tell me that this handsome man to her side is: None other than the fascinating Dr. Dale Volker!!

(as VOLKER starts smiling to camera and waving 'hi')

... the first death on Novus!!! The Ancestor who made it to our Top 10 list of "Ancestors you'd die to meet" despite not being a real Ancestor!!!!

(as VOLKER makes a face)

Everybody, say 'hi' to Dale!!!!!


Mostly DROWNED by audience ROAR:

PARK

He also named Novus...


The floating SCREEN shows the frenzied audience generally going wild. PARK and VOLKER try to walk away, but the mobile circus easily keeps up with them.

TV HOST (fast, to kino-camera)

Wait! What's that? What are you saying, Crystal? You want to tell him directly, live?


Adoring female audience member on floating SCREEN:

CRYSTAL (screaming, from SCREEN)

I wanna bear your babies! Dale Volker, I love you!!


TV HOST (fast, to kino-camera)

Your heard her, members of 'Destiny Watch'! Everybody who wants to have the charming Dr. Dale Volker's offspring, send your message to our inbox now!! Don't delay!!! You may be the chosen one!!!!


The floating SCREEN shows a caption:
Volker brides: with a quickly rising NUMBER.

The audience's excitement explodes. PARK raises a hand to the side of her 'glasses'.

PARK (giggling, sotto? to VOLKER)

Oh, Dale, you're blushing! Naughty, naughty!


More paling than blushing:

VOLKER (sotto)

I'm not! Not blushing! Not at all!


PARK

(giggles)

But Dale, I got infrared now, I can see your face going bloody!


TV HOST (fast, to kino-camera)

You heard right, viewers of the 'Destiny Watch Live Show': with us, the amazing Dr. Dale Volker, the man who knows how to blush in infrared, yet hide it in plain sight!

(to PARK)

And what's our revered Lisa Park have to say about him? Is there something between the lovely Dale Volker and you?

(before PARK has a chance to react)

Hold that thought! We've received an offer from the Fertility Center next corner!! Free services for the day!!! Ain't he a lucky man?

(to VOLKER, while herding them both towards the corner)

It's an offer you cannot refuse! Crystal says she's coming too, to meet you in the flesh!! Come avail yourself of this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity!!


Sure enough, just around the corner there's a big Fertility Center building, displaying lots of BABY PHOTOS & all. VOLKER's about to be PUSHED thru its doors.

VOLKER (sotto, to PARK)

Lisa!? I need your help here, please!


PARK

(giggles)

Oh, Dale, if anyone heard what you just said!


TV HOST (fast, to kino-camera)

But let's not forget our subject of the day: the great Dr. Lisa Park. Tell us, dear Lisa...


PARK (alarmed, to TV HOST)

Of my, what's that... on your face? Something's wrong with your makeup!? Looks like... flakes, is it? What a disaster!

(as TV HOST makes a face)

Let me check the ultraviolets. Oh, no! It's cracking all over! That can't be good!


Turning away from camera:

TV HOST (urgent, sotto)

Makeup! Makeup!! Good-for-nothing!!!


PARK quickly yanks a surprised VOLKER away from the Fertility Center, the TV HOST, the floating SCREEN, & the kino-camera.



# DESTINY. Volker's BEDROOM. He's awake on the bed (alone), staring at the ceiling, SIGHS.



* SPACE. NICE YELLOW SUN, with a couple rocky, Earth-like PLANETS + 1 gas giant farther away with a bunch of moons.

DESTINY DROPS FROM FTL some distance away, aimed straight at the star.



# GATE ROOM. Countdown CLOCK under 5 hours. RUSH and RILEY at the Consoles. Several military crewmembers standing watch. Pile of supplies gone.

YOUNG and GREER arrive.

YOUNG

(smiles)

Dr. Rush, how's it looking?


RUSH

Computer says we're at 17% energy, and a standard refill will get us above 80%, which is substantially higher than we've managed so far. Thank Novan engineering, though we'll only know for sure once we're thru.


YOUNG

Cross fingers.

(to Console)

Chloe, everything ok?


CHLOE (from Console)

Just as expected. The revised procedures work like a charm.


YOUNG (to Console)

Thank you. Scott?


SCOTT (from Console)

About 3 hours to the star. We're picking a debris cloud nearby. Recent. Looks like drones.


RILEY

(reviews PAD)

One of the confirmed destroyed swarms. There's a suitable planet in this system, with a Gate. Federation's studying it.


GREER

Better than the alternative!


WRAY (in a brand new BUSINESS SUIT) arrives.

WRAY

(smiling?)

Everybody's talking about your busy day yesterday. Novan news reports didn't quite show it all.


GREER

Very busy! So we made the news, huh?


RING ACTIVATES, starts SPINNING.

YOUNG

All for the better, Camille. What about you?


WRAY

Would you believe it was boring? Novan politics and sociology are complex and fascinating, but I need to go out more. See one of their big cities, perhaps.


YOUNG

We must talk later about using the Stasis Pods for all the FTL stretches of the journey.


WRAY

(surprised, upset?)

That's just the kind of...

(reconsidering?)

... not so bad idea, after all.


RING LOCKS.

GREER

Point for Dr. Rush!


VORTEX WHOOSHES.

YOUNG

Okay, everybody. Stay sharp, just in case.


PUDDLE STABILIZES.

OUT walk CHAIRMAN and MARSHALL (STAFF in hand), both ARMORED.

CHAIRMAN

(expansively)

Camille! I got your little memo about personnel transfers. That wasn't in the plan!


WRAY

The issue needs attention, sooner better than later.


CHAIRMAN

Agreed. Let's schedule a meeting...


MARSHALL

Riley, m'boy.


RILEY

Uncle Marshall, uncle Wally... Repairs are going well. Price tag keeps climbing, tho.


CHAIRMAN

Worth every bit!


YOUNG

(extends hand)

I thought you'd rather be at the Hospital, with your wife. Why the armor?


Shaking hands:

CHAIRMAN

She's doing great. It's a 7-Gate trip, barely an hour's commute. Been ages since I last surfed a star, and

(nods to RUSH)

I have a promise to keep.


Tapping his ARMOR suit with STAFF:

MARSHALL

Precautions required, tho, just in case. And afterwards we'll be meeting with my squad from Noctis: There's a grand ceremony scheduled.


CHAIRMAN

We're showing them the birth of a new colony. Hopefully they'll like it: pioneer worlds need soldiers. You're all invited, of course!


RILEY

Does that mean this system...?


CHAIRMAN

Yup. Initial surveys were completed a few hours ago. The new colonization wave has officially started.


YOUNG

(smiles)

Always in a hurry, huh?


RILEY

(keys PAD)

I'll renew my application for a private settlement right now!


CHAIRMAN

Same as always?

(RILEY nods)

Expect the same answer, then. Unless you got a lot more friends...


RILEY grins.

IN GATE new Novan supplies & personnel.

GREER (to RUSH)

Why would he want his own colony, anyway? He's a pretty popular guy already.


RUSH

And how: He's got 100s of girl friends. 1000s, if we listened to rumours. He's probably well on his way to becoming an Ancestor for the future generations.


As RILEY shows his PAD:

CHAIRMAN

What's this?


PAD SCREEN: a virtual GINN, very pregnant, clad in Novan-style 'Lucian fashion'. As she turns 'round, her stylish JACKET shows the words:
       Drone
MOTHERSHIP
       Raider
INSIDE


RILEY

I hope it cheers Ginn-sis up a little after she missed the big battle.


CHAIRMAN

(smiles?)

Yeah. It probably will!


PAD SCREEN: as the virtual GINN finishes turning, she looks straight to CAMERA, winks.

RILEY (sotto, to PAD)

Thanks, auntie Ginn!


Another Novan 20-something GATES IN, bearing a striking resemblance to Eli (trim? a half-head shorter? with Ginn's HAIR color?). His lightblue T-shirt reads
Black holes SUCK! around the image of a many-halo-ed black CIRCLE.

A small last-generation neo-kino follows him.

GREER (sotto, to WRAY)

There's another of them!?


WRAY (sotto)

C'mon, be diplomatic!


RILEY

Cousin! You missed it all!


CHAIRMAN

(beams)

And here's my eldest son, Eli Jr. Not even his mother could keep him from seeing by himself. I swear he takes after her.


Eli JR.

(shy?)

I got all the recordings, but I need to check realtime shield fluctuations against my models.


YOUNG

Welcome aboard, young Wallace. I see you take after your father, too.


Eli JR.

Thanks.


They walk to the exit, as more Novan crates, supplies & techs GATE IN.

CHAIRMAN

He got bored of brainwashing drones, has parked his Galactic Positioning System project, and now studies shield devices to improve them.


Eli JR.

Not 'parked', just delayed pending a thorough review of 1000+ years of old astronomical data, which might mean new theories about stellar drift patterns and perhaps even improvements to marginal Gate ranges. It's all in the report I sent you.


While everybody else digests that, CHAIRMAN nods approvingly.

RILEY

(winks?)

He was conceived in FTL, y'know.


As they both rush out:

RILEY

I'm mentoring him!


Eli JR.

Not true!!


As the others EXIT:

WRAY (to MARSHALL)

Another Wallace with lots of potential.


MARSHALL

(joking?)

It's a big happy family! But you gotta have a chart of 'em all!

(eyes her)

Say, was your day off as relaxing as you hoped?


WRAY

(smiles)

Oh, yes! Very. Then someone... happened.

(yawns?)

Can't say I've slept enough tonight.




# INFIRMARY. BROOKS, ASSISTANTS & a smiling T.J. tend to patients.

With the others out of earshot:

BROOKS (playful? to mic)

Camille!? Did you know Noctis' auroras will be at peak season in just a few weeks? That'd be the perfect...!


WRAY (O.S. from mic)

I'm busy now! Talk later!


BROOKS (to mic)

As you wish! Where are you?




# OBSERVATION DECK. The star's boiling hell of a surface can be seen very CLOSE. GIANT magnetic fields ARCH & PART before & under the ship.

People gathered for the show: All 3 ELIs, GREER, PARK (hand to her 'cyberglasses'), a happy-looking YOUNG, BROOKS, WRAY, RUSH (PAD in hand), VARRO, VOLKER, BRODY (glass of 'Scotch MK.XI' in hand), + others.



# BRIDGE. As Destiny ENTERS the star's outer corona. SCOTT, CHLOE, JAMES, RILEY, Eli JR. Checking Consoles, reviewing data...



* DESTINY in STAR-SKIMMING MODE. SHIELDS at max, star TURBULENCE in full show. Approaches CAMERA with open COLLECTORS, SURFS past.

LATER:
DESTINY RISING from STAR-tripping, trailing "fire", like a Phoenix.

Ahead: 8-9 drone Command Ships with deploying/deployed SWARMS. Another 3-4 MATERIALIZE.

FOCUS: 25+ of them have arrived. 1000s of drones deployed / DEPLOYING.

In all, 58 Command Ships are MATERIALIZING in FORMATION, their drones a WALL about to crash on Destiny.

DRONE POV:
RACING with lots of others for the target!





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